I'll try and have a post tomorrow night.
Been dealing with family issues. I don't feel comfortable going in to detail, but suffice to say, I've had a lot on my plate
I'm going to be busy for the next few days, so I don't know how soon I'll be able to post.
If we need to move on, just assume Beathra agrees to using the locator page and says something pragmatic about the power drain as a secondary objective.
Managed to force my way past the difficult part. It needs major reworking, but I'm getting back onto more solid ground. Still not going as fast as I was before, but I'm still dealing with the more complicated parts of the story, so I'm not surprised.
Beathra nodded. "Aye, she chose not to reveal us, at any rate." he said. "I cannot say if she is on our side beyond that. It would be incredibly helpful, if she were. We should definitely refocus our efforts to find our quarries."
I think I've managed to force my way through it. It's... Not great to read, but at least the essentials are there.
Basically, I'm at the point of introducing the first overt elements big, overarching plot line and making sure it makes sense without boring plot dumps and unnatural exposition.
Good advice in there! I should probably create a document to keep track of it in once place. I don't plan on changing anything just yet, not until I have a full narrative in place. Then I'll look over the suggestions while I'm doing the Big Rewrite.
Sadly I've only managed to add a couple...
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