I actually did like the Bumblebee/Cliffjumper relationship, too...but I can't help wondering if it wouldn't have worked better with either Bumper or Hubcap. Fans actually DO remember and like Cliffjumper, if only from the cartoon. I don't know if anyone has any strong feelings about those other two guys. Although, they could always have all these types of guys join a support group together. "We're not Bumblebee and that's okay." "I might not be Bumblebee, but I'm the Best me I can Be."
And, I'll admit I didn't touch on the Mentor system...because it kind of disappears after the first 10 issues or so. Not a bad idea, but I feel like it only really existed to give Bumblebee a reason to join the Decepticons. We don't really see "new" Transformers very often, so I guess a Mentor system probably just wouldn't come up very much is the problem.
And...no, I don't think they ever did explain why Bumblebee was expelled from the Security Corps before the series started. I'll admit, I might be forgetting something, though.
And, I'll admit I didn't touch on the Mentor system...because it kind of disappears after the first 10 issues or so. Not a bad idea, but I feel like it only really existed to give Bumblebee a reason to join the Decepticons. We don't really see "new" Transformers very often, so I guess a Mentor system probably just wouldn't come up very much is the problem.
And...no, I don't think they ever did explain why Bumblebee was expelled from the Security Corps before the series started. I'll admit, I might be forgetting something, though.
That's a good point, too. Ruckley never really mastered the art of the cliffhanger. A good end-of-issue page should leave readers saying "oh no, it's ending HERE?!" not "oh...this is where it stops?" Too often, Ruckley's issues just end with a conversation, I think.Mine would simply be "write issues." Clearly, he was writing for a trade mostly and that's not the end of the world, but you should still write individual issues as chapters at least that end on the last page. Some of Ruckley's issues felt like they finished mid-sentence.