First of all, this isn't like the comics where she'd just rip up a comic page and throws it away, this is her getting up set and demanding to see the manager Show's producer and bitching at him till she gets what she wants.
Second of all; Let's address her points shall we:
"Todd shouldn't get Hulk powers, The powers aren't the enemy, he is." - Agreed, but also completely kills the 'Hulk Blood' plot line, that even if we remove the stupid element, could have been used for something else. Change Completely kills a plot point, and makes most the season seem totally pointless.
"Hulk coming from nowhere to save me." - Agreed, She-Hulk shouldn't need her cousin to save her. But a whole "He's reformed and not our enemy" thing, might have been good. Otherwise, I'm fine for the 'real' reveal of him showing up at the end. Change works.
"This has nothing do with my storyline of accepting my powers." - And this 4th wall BS does? At least with the Intellgencia plot forcing her to be 'Just Jen' would actually lead to that; since she admits that it feels wrong, even if its technically what she wanted. I agree with the idea that things were getting overcrowded for no reason (Titiana just showing up for example) But the whole 'Intellegencia throws celebratory party, Emil is hired as a speaker but doesn't know who they are, Jen confronting them after wanting to talk to Emil' that much of the plot WORKS. Just erasing the jive that didn't work, and restarting from the moment she walks in on the party? That would have worked imo. You could have STILL had the 'Emil admits he's done wrong' bit without the 'just suddenly does it, for no IC reason because Karen didn't like it otherwise' But because of this overly elaborate 4th wall break, we completely skip ANY kind of climax to Jen's story of accepting who she is. To just her being fine, and her life working out perfectly with gratuitous DareDevil Cameo because Jen's still horny.
Not to mention the bitching about non-Shulkie stuff, just to wink and nod to fans doing the same.
I'm not someone that's disliked this show. I've been happy with all the rest of the season, but this finale kills my interest in wanting to see more of MCU She-Hulk.